Thanks for all the critiques. I'm on a bit of a hiatus from Magic at the moment. I'll be sure to review your comments more thoroughly when I get back to it.
Alrighty! I love the work so far and I am really looking forward to new stuff! I apologize if any of the critics are a bit long or annoying. Bad habit I suppose, but I've been around the MTG seen a wee bit too long and I guess it rubs off. Thanks and keep up the good work!